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Come with me sweet human thing
Give me your heart and I’ll make it sing
Forget your fears, leave them behind
Forget the troubles of your kind

I'll charm you with my knowing smile
You'll think of only me a while
And as my hand brushes your cheek
You'll feel your knees are getting weak

I've played the lover for so long
There is no sense of right or wrong
I lead you in a merry dance
Waiting for my only chance

The flowers in the vase are dead
But still romance is in your head
So I'll indulge your wants and needs
And then commit my evil deeds

A kiss upon your pearl white skin
Is all i need to draw you in
And as I give a soft embrace
A final glance towards your face

What a difference it would make
If you had known just what’s at stake
But now you're mine, no turning back
For you're too far along the track

I hold you close with gentle touch
And feeling I've delayed to much
You draw back from my ghostly hold
And my embrace turns deathly cold

Intoxicating sight and smell
I trust you taste as good aswell
Like finest, richest, sweetest wine
Tonight, my dear, on you I dine
©2008-2009 ~DoesntKnowWhatName
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A poem that hold a special place with me. I wanted to write something that had a touch of the human in it aswell as the monster. Someone or something that seemed like what they weren't.
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mhmm this is beautiful! I love it!

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Brightest Blessings :3
Ah am chur lovely buddy Sonata. And ah will promptly glomp joo.
Oh, wow.... Loved that last line. Exquisite and thoughtful, with that "unhumanness" going for it. Good job!

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~Beer is addicting. So is Zutara.~
Wow! That is the best vampire poem I've read so far! It's spot on and flows very nicely! Good job! I love it!

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Feel the fear....and do it anyway!
Thankies very much!! ^^

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"Never Say Never or You'll Never get Anywhere."
You're very welcome! ^ ^!

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Feel the fear....and do it anyway!

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